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aidencourt21
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Feedback please
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Basically, every criticism I have is the same as the previous one you posted.

Lose the stolen logo, The quality isn't great so I can't tell how well you did cutting him out, if you're making multiple banners dont use the exact style for all of them. (The purple and white colouring with the boxes surrounding the text).
The text looks pretty stretched - and the boxes aren't really needed.
Snapchat and Twitter logo aren't sized similarly, looks like you squished the snapchat one.
The text next to the social icons doesn't seem great either, the spacing between the icons and text feels too small and if you're having the white stroke on the icons, put it on the text too.
Maybe move the icons on top of the 'Life of Tom' too to so it isn't off balanced too far left.


You'll get better, just make your own logo (if you can't, even just a font with your name on is fine to begin with). Don't needlessly stretch things out of proportion and make sure your designs aren't all following the same exact scheme.
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why does it have Tesla Logos?
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PMSL wrotewhy does it have Tesla Logos?


It looks like he's using that as his own Graphic Designer personal logo
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Thanks everyone for the feedback, till I figure out a logo of my own or text style will have to use the logo provided. If anyone can help out, I will pay.
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