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So I'm new at this 'making a website' thing and I would love feedback on my best work so far. It's the first website that I took the time to develop. It's, of course, GTA related. Hopefully, it's in the correct section.

I used HTML, CSS, and Photoshop.

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bear in mind that this website is far from being finished and some of the pictures are placeholders. And for the picture on top, it's either gonna be a slider or a video.


Thanks.
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So far, so good! I enjoy the clean look that you have going for the overall design. Well done!
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Nice start. If you're interested in collaborating with another designer, feel free to message me.
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Not a bad start at all man it looks well organized!
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It looks pretty great! The only thing throwing me off is some of the text being slanted, it looks a little weird imo.
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Thanks, I appreciate the feedback I'm proud of it. the last picture with the black areas reminds me of the San Andreas loading screen.

some things aren't centered because I had to use ems instead of for example margin-left: auto;
margin-right: auto;

Also about the collaboration offer, thanks I will sure keep it in mind.

and for the slanted text, I don't know, I thought if I left it straight, it would look boring or something
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Whut wrote Thanks, I appreciate the feedback I'm proud of it. the last picture with the black areas reminds me of the San Andreas loading screen.

some things aren't centered because I had to use ems instead of for example margin-left: auto;
margin-right: auto;

Also about the collaboration offer, thanks I will sure keep it in mind.

and for the slanted text, I don't know, I thought if I left it straight, it would look boring or something


No problem my man! Keep up the good work.
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I decided to remake the website using boostrap 4 instead of making it from scratch, that way, it's responsive on all resolutions and is mobile friendly.
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Whut wrote I decided to remake the website using boostrap 4 instead of making it from scratch, that way, it's responsive on all resolutions and is mobile friendly.
interesting. Got any pictures or a link to the update?
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This looks nice! A few things I would personally change are:

The layer style of the text on the bottom pics, I would personally change the layer to a solid colour instead of it being transparent. I would also perhaps move all 3 texts to the top of the pictures so that they allign

Also, I like the idea to not have the bottom pictures bordering, however, I would maybe either merge them or have a diagonal border etc (to switch things up)

All in all, good work!

(I do not know the restrictions that come with coding and so if some of my feedback is irrelevant then please ignore it )

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