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ZerrafRX
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Let me know what you guys think!

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Is that just a screen shot of the website you have created?
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It is just a frame of the page that i am designing for a client. so basically
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i think you should remove the last "s" from each alcohol so it would just read, "vodka, rum, tequila, gin.." etc. in my opinion it looks more clean and professional that way. also maybe a different font? text looks a bit small too.
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Before I get into this, take this as something to learn from and do not take offence.

  • The website navigation links in the top right aren't evenly spaced
  • The drop shadow inside the search box isn't necessary and isn't legible at all
  • The categories at the bottom of the page aren't aligned to the centre, and if you look, the tequilas box isn't aligned to the box below which is for liquors
  • The vodka bottle is higher than the other bottles, which puts you off even further
  • Some of the category text isn't centred, which is a must
  • I wouldn't say the typeface/font you have used is the most suitable one, try experiment with other fonts/typefaces and choose one that would suit the audience further, also preferably one that isn't all caps?


These are just key things I'm pointing out, but the idea behind it is ok. Keep it up, hopefully you take these with a pinch of salt!

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Looks good so far mate, have you got a link to your website yet?
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I think it's looking really good so far dude!
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Working on a few web-projects also, looks clean. Although, noting what the above replies said.
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I like it but i can see that its still quite basic. Not saying i could do better but maybe look at making the alcahols multiple bottles and bigger squares such that they are even so 2 sets of 4 or 4 sets of 2.

Then i think it would begin to look better
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