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My best header yet. IMO
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My best header yet. IMOPosted:

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I want harsh criticism on this please, I really want to improve. Thank you to anyone who looks.

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Hey dude, not a hard ttg critic tho, but looks very clean, just dont like the ''f's"but it is the font so whatever lol, very clean.
9/10
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Please?
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The font doesn't fit the theme. Should have used something a tad more clean.

Background wise I like the concept of it but it looks like a mess also (depending on how you view it). This can be a good thing or a bad thing, depending on if you are going for a theme or a bit of everything. I personally cannot tell what it's meant to be.

The spikes should be sharper and the same on both sides. They look very different (size and shape wise). If you were going for a Kunai blades idea you could have done more of a semi-circle sort of shape starting big and going smaller, making a nice effect. They should also be a bit brighter as they are hard to see. I prefer the ones on the left compared to the ones on the right.

I don't see the need in the crystal like white parts.

Colour scheme is nice
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LoyaIty wrote The font doesn't fit the theme. Should have used something a tad more clean.

Background wise I like the concept of it but it looks like a mess also (depending on how you view it). This can be a good thing or a bad thing, depending on if you are going for a theme or a bit of everything. I personally cannot tell what it's meant to be.

The spikes should be sharper and the same on both sides. They look very different (size and shape wise). If you were going for a Kunai blades idea you could have done more of a semi-circle sort of shape starting big and going smaller, making a nice effect. They should also be a bit brighter as they are hard to see. I prefer the ones on the left compared to the ones on the right.

I don't see the need in the crystal like white parts.

Colour scheme is nice

Thank you for real criticism, I've taken all of this into account.
The font was chosen by the person as he wanted a slightly grunge feel and the spikes on the side are the same size and they are spikey wings (if that makes sense?) and the white parts where cherry tree leaves that I just turned the opacity down. Again thank you for your opinion it means a lot
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I'm not really a fan of this style personally I find it very generic. However, some people prefer it especially people on here, gamers/cod usually.
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Not a big fan of the text, I find it hard to read and kind of blurry. But I've seen headers like this. They are really cool for the people that like them. Good job dude!
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illume wrote I'm not really a fan of this style personally I find it very generic. However, some people prefer it especially people on here, gamers/cod usually.

I understand why many wouldn't like it. Thank you for the feedback.
KyloCrux wrote Not a big fan of the text, I find it hard to read and kind of blurry. But I've seen headers like this. They are really cool for the people that like them. Good job dude!

Thank you!
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I think this looks pretty dope dude! Sick
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Just like illume, I'm not a massive fan of this style but each to their own. I do like what you have done with it though As a comment above said, the font is okay but I think it should be a clearer font on the social links and the 'official twitter' writing
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