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ysuar09
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This is only my fourth song recorded, so it definitely doesn't sound the best, but lyrically wise and flow i think is good. Im not good at mixing and stuff like that so be easy on me

I posted this a couple days ago btw but i re-recorded the song and it sounds better, sp give it a listen, it'd mean a lot

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Sounds pretty good mate, liked it alot.
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I like, espically the instrumental.
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sounds pretty good my man!

love the instrumental too!
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For constructive criticism I'd say work on the delivery but the beat is solid.
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Narcissistic and monotone. This kind of music just comes across as completely delusional to me.
If you can sing then do sing, but if you can only talk quickly about how many girls you get and how much money you have in the bank then try not to inflict that upon the world.

You'll be glad to hear though that this sounds practically identical to every other 'professional' song in this genre that I've ever heard so congratulations on that front I guess.
Although that probably says more about the 'professionals' than it does about you.
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Thanks everyone for the feedback, glad to see that people like the song!
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Eli wrote Narcissistic and monotone. This kind of music just comes across as completely delusional to me.
If you can sing then do sing, but if you can only talk quickly about how many girls you get and how much money you have in the bank then try not to inflict that upon the world.

You'll be glad to hear though that this sounds practically identical to every other 'professional' song in this genre that I've ever heard so congratulations on that front I guess.
Although that probably says more about the 'professionals' than it does about you.


Maybe you'd like my other song a lot better then, guaranteed.

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