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My new android game!
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First impression:
From the start you can already tell it is a heavy unity based game. Which I mean this is just my opinion you could've chosen a way better background.
There is no need for that massive counting rock. You could simply just make it a red text in the upper corner or off to the side of the game not in a spot that will take ones content eye off the main view.
You really need to change that menu text I am sorry, but you could've done without that massively annoying color text. I feel like I just left primary games. Your title logo is blurry across two of my devices. Simply just code the text on top of the picture much cleaner, and less load on the background.
You can see the four corners of the imagery, it bugs me personally.
There is so much you could improve in a such a simple game and do not try arguing with me and saying it isn't that easy. Responsive design for in game is very easy.
Second impression:
After a little bit of playing it gets really repetitive, but yet is in a way addicting.
Ideas - Suggestions:
Do take these into consideration, they will help you out. I understand the game is called race to earth, but the design is utterly terrible.
You could make the game into something more modern with a fun touch. Make the background something flat, a nice yellow or red, blue, green. The list goes on. Make the obstacles circles, squares, and or triangles.
Make them fit the design well, a light grey and black 3D oriented object would be fine.
If you can't do any of what is stated above AT LEAST revamp the background image, the title menu and text.
You asked for feedback and you got it.
I am not going to say your game is bad, but you do need a lot of work to keep it going. You have the basics down now go and continue an update!
From the start you can already tell it is a heavy unity based game. Which I mean this is just my opinion you could've chosen a way better background.
There is no need for that massive counting rock. You could simply just make it a red text in the upper corner or off to the side of the game not in a spot that will take ones content eye off the main view.
You really need to change that menu text I am sorry, but you could've done without that massively annoying color text. I feel like I just left primary games. Your title logo is blurry across two of my devices. Simply just code the text on top of the picture much cleaner, and less load on the background.
You can see the four corners of the imagery, it bugs me personally.
There is so much you could improve in a such a simple game and do not try arguing with me and saying it isn't that easy. Responsive design for in game is very easy.
Second impression:
After a little bit of playing it gets really repetitive, but yet is in a way addicting.
Ideas - Suggestions:
Do take these into consideration, they will help you out. I understand the game is called race to earth, but the design is utterly terrible.
You could make the game into something more modern with a fun touch. Make the background something flat, a nice yellow or red, blue, green. The list goes on. Make the obstacles circles, squares, and or triangles.
Make them fit the design well, a light grey and black 3D oriented object would be fine.
If you can't do any of what is stated above AT LEAST revamp the background image, the title menu and text.
You asked for feedback and you got it.
I am not going to say your game is bad, but you do need a lot of work to keep it going. You have the basics down now go and continue an update!
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Thanks for your feedback, tbh when I put it on here it was really early in its development. I like all your ideas and tbh I have fixed all those things I believe. I have only just seen your comment so thats why I have only just replied but other people said similar things. If you redownload it or update it then you will see the changes. Another update is rolling out soon. cheers for the feedback and any more is welcome. cheers
Mitochondria wroteFirst impression:
From the start you can already tell it is a heavy unity based game. Which I mean this is just my opinion you could've chosen a way better background.
There is no need for that massive counting rock. You could simply just make it a red text in the upper corner or off to the side of the game not in a spot that will take ones content eye off the main view.
You really need to change that menu text I am sorry, but you could've done without that massively annoying color text. I feel like I just left primary games. Your title logo is blurry across two of my devices. Simply just code the text on top of the picture much cleaner, and less load on the background.
You can see the four corners of the imagery, it bugs me personally.
There is so much you could improve in a such a simple game and do not try arguing with me and saying it isn't that easy. Responsive design for in game is very easy.
Second impression:
After a little bit of playing it gets really repetitive, but yet is in a way addicting.
Ideas - Suggestions:
Do take these into consideration, they will help you out. I understand the game is called race to earth, but the design is utterly terrible.
You could make the game into something more modern with a fun touch. Make the background something flat, a nice yellow or red, blue, green. The list goes on. Make the obstacles circles, squares, and or triangles.
Make them fit the design well, a light grey and black 3D oriented object would be fine.
If you can't do any of what is stated above AT LEAST revamp the background image, the title menu and text.
You asked for feedback and you got it.
I am not going to say your game is bad, but you do need a lot of work to keep it going. You have the basics down now go and continue an update!
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I'll give it a download and check it out
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