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My first song.(Giving gold to best feedback)
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Let me know what you think.
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Personally I'm not feeling it at all.
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I didnt figure most of this site would feel my muisc lol.
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Do you want me to be honest?

This shit absolutely bangs on my sound system. Your vocals are good, but definitely room for improvement. The majority of new people just rap about shit that makes no sense. Atleast your song has a context, you being "so for real". You sound like a deeper voice of Cam Meekins. I dunno if it's just me who thinks that but yeah haha.

Did you produce it yourself too or nah? The production is alright, again like your vocals, room for improvement. Don't take the room for improvement as negative feedback, I'm not saying you're bad, it's a good first track but a lot of people are coming into the game with the same style. You need to be able to stand out from the crowd, doing your own thing etc. Most people are tryna copy yung lean or uzi and yachty.

Keep doing your thing though, any feedback is feedback at the end of the day. Good luck with more of your songs, I look forward to hearing the next one.
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I quite like it bro

It's not bad just stay at it & keep improving


Hopefully you become famous one ;)
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I fw it but you need to work on the quality of your sound or go to a professional studio and get it produced
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wasnt to bad man needs some work practice is always perfect man don't give up ignore what they say just keep flowin haha
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iRep wrote wasnt to bad man needs some work practice is always perfect man don't give up ignore what they say just keep flowin haha
It ain't like anyone said he's garbage. I always prefer negative feedback over positive so I know what I can do to make it better next time
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I think it was pretty good in my opinion but I wasn't really feeling the effect you used on the hook. What mic and program do you use to record?
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