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#Maccaback is a play on with Pogback because I've been away a while... Yeah I'm not that funny but here it is!

http://i.imgur.com/idSh34Z.jpg


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Needs some work, need to learn how to blend layers better.

It looks like everything was copy and pasted and you just lowered the opacity.

Keep doing work and don't stop you will get better.
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I think the lines make the picture look bad. It looks cool, but I can't look at it for long. So, I would say try and remove those lines and see how it looks.
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I think for myself, the lines effect ruins the whole picture. I would remove that! All the font effect. Make it nice and bold and change the style for the font. Hardly see the letter "P" and others.
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Thanks for that feedback! I also thought there was too much going off in background, I've now simplified it for now, doing more stuff to it tomorrow. This is a draft!

http://i.imgur.com/idSh34Z.jpg
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One with a smoke effect too
http://i.imgur.com/Hgz2Dxq.jpg
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MaccaDesigns wrote#Maccaback is a play on with Pogback because I've been away a while... Yeah I'm not that funny but here it is!


I don't like this, I think it is really messy. Is there a specific style in which you're attempting to match here? I do like your logo though.
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MaccaDesigns wroteThanks for that feedback! I also thought there was too much going off in background, I've now simplified it for now, doing more stuff to it tomorrow. This is a draft!

http://i.imgur.com/idSh34Z.jpg


I really like this one, nice n clean, 9/10
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Pido wrote
MaccaDesigns wrote#Maccaback is a play on with Pogback because I've been away a while... Yeah I'm not that funny but here it is!


I don't like this, I think it is really messy. Is there a specific style in which you're attempting to match here? I do like your logo though.

I thought that too! I've made changes. It was a mess about just using different effects and layer styles
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MaccaDesigns wrote
Pido wrote
MaccaDesigns wrote#Maccaback is a play on with Pogback because I've been away a while... Yeah I'm not that funny but here it is!


I don't like this, I think it is really messy. Is there a specific style in which you're attempting to match here? I do like your logo though.

I thought that too! I've made changes. It was a mess about just using different effects and layer styles


I really like the smokeless edit! Thats some very nice work!
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