It's too dark.
There's too much rain, and spiderman doesn't look wet at all.
Maybe try removing the rain, or lowing it a little bit.
If you keep it, try to make spiderman's clothes looks wet, and shiny.

The colors don't look too nice together in my opinion.
Try adding some lighter color corrections.
A gradient map could be nice.

Illustrated wrote It's too dark.
There's too much rain, and spiderman doesn't look wet at all.
Maybe try removing the rain, or lowing it a little bit.
If you keep it, try to make spiderman's clothes looks wet, and shiny.

The colors don't look too nice together in my opinion.
Try adding some lighter color corrections.
A gradient map could be nice.

Finally a reply! Thanks Illustrated, some tips from the master is always nice.

I will make these changes now and keep you all updated.

pulsev wrote

Illustrated wrote It's too dark.
There's too much rain, and spiderman doesn't look wet at all.
Maybe try removing the rain, or lowing it a little bit.
If you keep it, try to make spiderman's clothes looks wet, and shiny.

The colors don't look too nice together in my opinion.
Try adding some lighter color corrections.
A gradient map could be nice.

Finally a reply! Thanks Illustrated, some tips from the master is always nice.

I will make these changes now and keep you all updated.

The fact I just read "from the master" and on a post yesterday you said that people were brown nosing someone else is pretty ironic.

ySense wrote

pulsev wrote

Illustrated wrote It's too dark.
There's too much rain, and spiderman doesn't look wet at all.
Maybe try removing the rain, or lowing it a little bit.
If you keep it, try to make spiderman's clothes looks wet, and shiny.

The colors don't look too nice together in my opinion.
Try adding some lighter color corrections.
A gradient map could be nice.

Finally a reply! Thanks Illustrated, some tips from the master is always nice.

I will make these changes now and keep you all updated.

The fact I just read "from the master" and on a post yesterday you said that people were brown nosing someone else is pretty ironic.

You upset because I didn't call you the master because everyone else (bar me) is better than you?

pulsev wrote

ySense wrote

pulsev wrote

Illustrated wrote It's too dark.
There's too much rain, and spiderman doesn't look wet at all.
Maybe try removing the rain, or lowing it a little bit.
If you keep it, try to make spiderman's clothes looks wet, and shiny.

The colors don't look too nice together in my opinion.
Try adding some lighter color corrections.
A gradient map could be nice.

Finally a reply! Thanks Illustrated, some tips from the master is always nice.

I will make these changes now and keep you all updated.

The fact I just read "from the master" and on a post yesterday you said that people were brown nosing someone else is pretty ironic.

You upset because I didn't call you the master because everyone else (bar me) is better than you?

I'm not even going to retaliate to that.

I don't like it so far, because the render itself is in a really weird position. He has too much head room. You have the rule of thirds down, but he is way to far down at the bottom.

If he is the Focal point, then he should be the main thing in the piece.

Axe wrote I don't like it so far, because the render itself is in a really weird position. He has too much head room. You have the rule of thirds down, but he is way to far down at the bottom.

If he is the Focal point, then he should be the main thing in the piece.

Thanks for your feedback.
Will make changes.

Illustrated is pretty spot on with the criticism, but also I don't think a field is the best background for this render. Definition of "Noir":


Note; Bleak, sleazy setting. i.e a city.
Good attempt though!

N9ne wrote Illustrated is pretty spot on with the criticism, but also I don't think a field is the best background for this render. Definition of "Noir":


Definition of NOIR
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:  crime fiction featuring hard-boiled cynical characters and bleak sleazy settings

Note; Bleak, sleazy setting. i.e a city.
Good attempt though!

Thanks for your feedback. Might change the background render but I'm not sure.