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A 3D Motion Intro for one of my teams what im in.
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It's nice. How long did it take to make it?
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AV8 wrote It's nice. How long did it take to make it?


1 hour and 25 mins and the rendering took me 35 minutes.
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This has potential.
Although this 'style' has been used a lot, it's still pretty simple and effective.

Here are a few improvements:

If you made the floor and the background the same colour. (Compositing background)
It would be a lot less contrasting and would fit a lot nicer.

If we're going to get up close and personal, make the textures/materials more detailed.

You need to work on your camera animation / positioning;

Position 1
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is way too similar to position 2
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it also goes wayyyy too fast.
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The last camera shot is VERY nice!
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Love the fade out (It's not too fast or slow).
Again, if we're close to the objects, make them detailed and looks nice.

You could've also dabbled with the lighting a bit more and cast some real nice shadows.

Overall I'd say it's a pretty decent intro.
Maybe could've done with some simple 2D text done in another program.
(Sony vegas, after effects etc.)

Nice work.

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Polygon wrote
This has potential.
Although this 'style' has been used a lot, it's still pretty simple and effective.

Here are a few improvements:

If you made the floor and the background the same colour. (Compositing background)
It would be a lot less contrasting and would fit a lot nicer.

If we're going to get up close and personal, make the textures/materials more detailed.

You need to work on your camera animation / positioning;

Position 1
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is way too similar to position 2
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it also goes wayyyy too fast.
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The last camera shot is VERY nice!
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Love the fade out (It's not too fast or slow).
Again, if we're close to the objects, make them detailed and looks nice.

You could've also dabbled with the lighting a bit more and cast some real nice shadows.

Overall I'd say it's a pretty decent intro.
Maybe could've done with some simple 2D text done in another program.
(Sony vegas, after effects etc.)

Nice work.

-Polygon


Thanks man I appreciate the feedback and your absolutely right i need to work on my camera angles and positioning btw i did not know this style has been used alot lol. Btw more intros are on my channel.
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Polygon wrote
This has potential.
Although this 'style' has been used a lot, it's still pretty simple and effective.

Here are a few improvements:

If you made the floor and the background the same colour. (Compositing background)
It would be a lot less contrasting and would fit a lot nicer.

If we're going to get up close and personal, make the textures/materials more detailed.

You need to work on your camera animation / positioning;

Position 1
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is way too similar to position 2
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it also goes wayyyy too fast.
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The last camera shot is VERY nice!
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Love the fade out (It's not too fast or slow).
Again, if we're close to the objects, make them detailed and looks nice.

You could've also dabbled with the lighting a bit more and cast some real nice shadows.

Overall I'd say it's a pretty decent intro.
Maybe could've done with some simple 2D text done in another program.
(Sony vegas, after effects etc.)

Nice work.

-Polygon


also i was gonna put 2d/3d text but the intro would of been way too long and my subcribers moane about that but not my clients lol.
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I'd Pay Someone If They Can Make Me a Intro For My Youtube.
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