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My 2D Dream Animation - Nottingham's Young Creatives Awards
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MrWheat
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This is actually my first time doing a 1 minute 2D animation. This was an animation assignment for my college and it's going to be entered into an competition. I'm obviously going to do a resubmission and improve on the animation, for example I need to add more detail to the scenes and make sure my voice over is stereo not mono.

Anyways, I would appreciate it if all of you could tell me what you liked what was in the animation and what could I improve on?

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0:41 was to me an unnecessary transition, the creatures should feel more alive maybe there arms/mouth moving. when the character closes his eyes its kinda weird the eye lids are black just make an arch shape and color that black for example : [ Register or Signin to view external links. ] other then that man you did a good job c:
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Perverse wrote
0:41 was to me an unnecessary transition, the creatures should feel more alive maybe there arms/mouth moving. when the character closes his eyes its kinda weird the eye lids are black just make an arch shape and color that black for example : [ Register or Signin to view external links. ] other then that man you did a good job c:


Thankyou so much for this amazing feedback/constructive critism. The reason I didn't animate the arm's and mouths of these assets were because I didn't know at the time how to do 2d character rigging but because i've watched some tuts from duik and rubberhose,I know how to character rigging and you'll be seeing my improvements in my resubmission = second version. Finally another improvement i'm going to adjust/take into consideration is the eyes
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yo that was pretty spooky
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Rawrrrrrr wrote yo that was pretty spooky


aha thanks, one of my weird dreams/nightmares.
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