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I created a Nike Air Max 2015 project and wanted to know your opinions

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UPDATE: I took peoples advise and got rid of some of the text


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Too much text.
People won't read that.

Photoshop is for editing photos,
not for writing articles.
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I really like this, I'd lay off SOME of the text though. Very clean. 9.4/10
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CriticaI wrote
Too much text.
People won't read that.

Photoshop is for editing photos,
not for writing articles.

Please explain typography to me
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Looks like the packet which I never open that comes with my new pair of shoes

Awesome work, very professional look to it

As a suggestion, for every shoes in your picture, have a different color that you can buy them in
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The blurred background image throws it all off for me. I like the font, but maybe cut back on the writing a tad.
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Looks good to me, but did you actually pentool the sneaker?
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CriticaI wrote
Too much text.
People won't read that.

Photoshop is for editing photos,
not for writing articles.

I'll have to disagree with you.
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No expert here, just a consumer who enjoys collecting trainers.

The blur behind threw me off slightly, but other than that it looks like how I can imagine Nike would advertise these.

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you should get that published at nike.com great work clean and proffesional
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