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So I made this typographic poster for a class @ school,
This is my first attempt so i would love some feedback, ideas on what to add, what to do differently, etc.
This took me maybe 2 hours more of less. ( being as its my first and I placed the text down on my own ).
First Image( First attempt ):
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UPDATED ( Fixed some things ):
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Added color:
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EDIT: I notice that a word is too far down where the door is.


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This is nice dude I like it , well worth the two hours huh.
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This is a nice first attempt.

If I tried for the first time, trust me out of 50 words, they'd all be overlapping.
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Some of the words are overlapping.

And you should try to get some of the edges straightened out.
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Illustrated wrote Some of the words are overlapping.

And you should try to get some of the edges straightened out.

Ah I just noticed some words were overlappng, Thank you for feedback, Also i will go and straighten it.
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It looks good bro, Maybe a little change.
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as illustrated said some words are overlapping , im not to fond of the red boxes, i think you should make some text red to make an outline of a square. typography is kinda hard since its mostly all about placement. overall i think you did a nice job
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Perverse wrote as illustrated said some words are overlapping , im not to fond of the red boxes, i think you should make some text red to make an outline of a square. typography is kinda hard since its mostly all about placement. overall i think you did a nice job
Ah yes, my teacher didnt like the red either, but i think i understand what you're meaning with the outline of red, Thank you for the feedback.
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Pretty cool! I wish I could do some typography videos with songs. They're pretty cool!
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Thanks everyone for feedback! I shall edit this a bit and correct it so it looks cleaner and doesnt overlap as much.
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