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Catalyst Modz Hoodie Concept Design
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I would like some feed back on my hoodie design. (It can be postive or negative)

Hoodie Front Side:
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Hoodie Back Side:
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STAFF NOTE: I don't know if this is consider advertising, but its not. If it is than you have permission to delete my post.


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Aye the advertising is REAL! Looks amazing though.
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I like the front but i would have had some type of effect on the controller handle or something. Also the back is just to clogged for the same name the way it is set up, try to find a more creative way to say your name is the same for all the social sites.
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Wow it looks really nice, well done!
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Does not look like a clothing design.
More like a business card on a shirt.

I don't think anyone would wear a business card shirt.

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I would remove everything on the back, keeping just the front.
But that would make it too plain, in my opinion.

I personally don't like the logo its self... The controller, and the text.
The placement of the text doesn't look good to me.
Maybe raise the whole logo a bit, and mess with the sizing, and placement.
The 'C' in it is obviously supposed to look grungey but it just looks messy to me.
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Well, based on the down votes on Erik's (Illustrated) comment, I'm glad you know how to take criticism... So much for wanting feedback (positive or negative)...

So let me break this down for you:

  • I'm hoping this is a vector. Do you know why it should be? Blow up something pixel based and see how well the quality is compared to a path based design
  • The back is not needed at all - Way too much text. Looks like a book on someone's back
  • Simple or nothing - On the back again, there is no need to complicate something for the need to fill space. Hoodies are often better without a back. If you "need" something, your social media is all the same, one text for multiple icons, not multiple lines of text for multiple icons.
  • I understand the simplicity of a design, say on the front but there is definitely more you can do to make the concept better. That's up to you as my image would be different, but there is a difference between minimalism and simplicity


That's my feedback. Do with it what you would please. Not the best of designs and not the worst. Up to you what you want the final product to be really.
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Wow this is the first apparel design I have seen on here. Its good but I don't like the back side.

Instead of having all the logos for social media on the back just put
@CatalystModz
or don't put anything at all.

plus don't be afraid to use colors on apparel.
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