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Im not very good but i kinda went for a dark scheme

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Please rate 1/10
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thats sweet:) would you like to make some graphics for me? pm me
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Anyone? this took me around an hour to make
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That is very nice man! You should do GFX for people!
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10/10 Bravo Son, Bravo.
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BLN wrote That is very nice man! You should do GFX for people!

No, stop right there.

PraxCinema wrote 10/10 Bravo Son, Bravo.
Exelento

Wrong. No work is ever a 10/10, there's no such thing as a perfect piece. Never use that rating again.




On topic here are my concerns:

  • Too dark, at a normal display brightness, it'll be hard for someone to make it out
  • What is the logo supposed to represent? Yes, I can make out the "I" for "Index", but that is still quite vague and abstract. Logos should be a "here's what we are" type of visual kick in the face - that are enjoyable

    Now here's where I get picky

  • Proper alignment: your goal with the pentool was the be symmetrical as I can see, it didn't work out just perfect. Close, but no cigar. When you flipped the copy vertically, you can see where they don't align (look where the tips leave off):
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  • Leave proper spacing with the text. The minimum amount of space between the bottom of the logo should be AT LEAST the distance in pixels from line one to line too. It's a cushion that doesn't flow well if unbalanced.


It's not a bad start, but there's still work to be done. Keep at it.
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Bap wrote
BLN wrote That is very nice man! You should do GFX for people!

No, stop right there.

PraxCinema wrote 10/10 Bravo Son, Bravo.
Exelento

Wrong. No work is ever a 10/10, there's no such thing as a perfect piece. Never use that rating again.




On topic here are my concerns:

  • Too dark, at a normal display brightness, it'll be hard for someone to make it out
  • What is the logo supposed to represent? Yes, I can make out the "I" for "Index", but that is still quite vague and abstract. Logos should be a "here's what we are" type of visual kick in the face - that are enjoyable

    Now here's where I get picky

  • Proper alignment: your goal with the pentool was the be symmetrical as I can see, it didn't work out just perfect. Close, but no cigar. When you flipped the copy vertically, you can see where they don't align (look where the tips leave off):
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  • Leave proper spacing with the text. The minimum amount of space between the bottom of the logo should be AT LEAST the distance in pixels from line one to line too. It's a cushion that doesn't flow well if unbalanced.


It's not a bad start, but there's still work to be done. Keep at it.


My personal opinion on it, I think its very good.
#8. Posted:
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Awesome feedback from Bap...

As for the logo, it's a few random shapes that slightly resemble an "I"...

But is that enough?, not really. Very badly put together, within that hour of designing it's worth checking it's all aligned properly.
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It's not absolute awful, i have seen a lot worse. But it could have a lot of finishing touches to make it that extra bit better! Keep trying and you will get better
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It looks unfinished but it is nice man maybe if you added to it then it'd be perfect
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