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I made this a wile ago. I appreciate the feedback. Please rate 1-10
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The text is a little too bright for me.

The background could have been a nice geometric style but all one colour and blah.

Your vignette is too sharp, it needs to taper a bit more
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Sorry but most of your work is rushed and just pasted on here, take your time
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DeputyMorales wrote Tbh I dont think you have any room to talk, the work on your shop was terrible imo.


OT:
I would rate 2/10 the cubes look a little blury and text is not centered.
It has some potential but keep at it.

Would it matter if he did have room to talk?
He's giving his opinion, and some decent feedback.
Though it may be short n' sweet, it's feedback.

No need to critique a person on another's topic..
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Chi wrote

DeputyMorales wrote Tbh I dont think you have any room to talk, the work on your shop was terrible imo.


OT:
I would rate 2/10 the cubes look a little blury and text is not centered.
It has some potential but keep at it.

Would it matter if he did have room to talk?
He's giving his opinion, and some decent feedback.
Though it may be short n' sweet, it's feedback.

No need to critique a person on another's topic..


It does matter when hes being hypocritical.
And nobody can tell anybody how long they should take to make something and post it.
Hes obviously just asking for feedback on a background he made.
He can post whenever and as frequently as he wants.
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Learn to move away from stocks. They are trashy and over used, I speak hypocritically though since I still use them no and again. Try playing around with the layer styles as-well. It makes things easier when you know what everything means.
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Slyestcat wrote Learn to move away from stocks. They are trashy and over used, I speak hypocritically though since I still use them no and again. Try playing around with the layer styles as-well. It makes things easier when you know what everything means.


Incorrect, stocks if used in the correct way can have astounding outcomes.

I think I understand what you meant though
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DeputyMorales wrote
Chi wrote

DeputyMorales wrote Tbh I dont think you have any room to talk, the work on your shop was terrible imo.


OT:
I would rate 2/10 the cubes look a little blury and text is not centered.
It has some potential but keep at it.

Would it matter if he did have room to talk?
He's giving his opinion, and some decent feedback.
Though it may be short n' sweet, it's feedback.

No need to critique a person on another's topic..


It does matter when hes being hypocritical.
And nobody can tell anybody how long they should take to make something and post it.
Hes obviously just asking for feedback on a background he made.
He can post whenever and as frequently as he wants.


You fail to understand my meaning..

In what way does being hypocritical justify anything that he has said?

He's posting his opinion, which should leave no reason to be contested.
Whether he has 'room to talk', or not.

And yes, you can almost certainly tell how long, or how much effort went into a piece.
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Chi wrote
DeputyMorales wrote
Chi wrote

DeputyMorales wrote Tbh I dont think you have any room to talk, the work on your shop was terrible imo.


OT:
I would rate 2/10 the cubes look a little blury and text is not centered.
It has some potential but keep at it.

Would it matter if he did have room to talk?
He's giving his opinion, and some decent feedback.
Though it may be short n' sweet, it's feedback.

No need to critique a person on another's topic..


It does matter when hes being hypocritical.
And nobody can tell anybody how long they should take to make something and post it.
Hes obviously just asking for feedback on a background he made.
He can post whenever and as frequently as he wants.


You fail to understand my meaning..

In what way does being hypocritical justify anything that he has said?

He's posting his opinion, which should leave no reason to be contested.
Whether he has 'room to talk', or not.

And yes, you can almost certainly tell how long, or how much effort went into a piece.

I agree with Chi. It doesn't matter if he is any good or not.
It's still just his opinion. You can't tell him his views on a piece of artwork are wrong.
And even if he is not skilled, you don't know if he has an eye for art or not.
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Hmmm 4/10 needs work
good job tho
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