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Wokze
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Hello guys,

So i have been inactive for a couple of months now, haven't been doing any work at all really, but i decided i'd enter the Variant Arts competition, as i had never done any web design in the past.

So yeah, i think it turned out pretty well, but just looking for some feedback.



Layers:

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I Put them in groups, there is a lot of layers.



Final Image:

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So yeah, any feedback given is highly appreciated.
Thanks.

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Zef (02-16-2014)
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I personally don't really like it at all. The proportions of the website are really odd, and also the textures that you used look pretty bad with the whole site.

Also the color scheme could be improved a lot.
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Decent for a first, however a few things you may want to fix.

First off, you could do better off with some text in it.
Either you can word it yourself,
or be lazy like myself and use [ Register or Signin to view external links. ] .

You may also want to watch the size of the fonts found in the navigation,
to make it somewhat, proportional to the whole piece.

As for the footer, you may just want to shorten it a tad,
it's a little long from what I see.

On a side note: You swapped up Illustrated a my piece, nothing to serious but may want to fix it hehe

Hope it helps,
-Chi
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Chi wrote
Decent for a first, however a few things you may want to fix.

First off, you could do better off with some text in it.
Either you can word it yourself,
or be lazy like myself and use [ Register or Signin to view external links. ] .

You may also want to watch the size of the fonts found in the navigation,
to make it somewhat, proportional to the whole piece.

As for the footer, you may just want to shorten it a tad,
it's a little long from what I see.

On a side note: You swapped up Illustrated a my piece, nothing to serious but may want to fix it hehe

Hope it helps,
-Chi


Haha, ill fix that when i get a chance.

As for the footer, it was the size in the template on the post, however i will change it.
Thanks for the advice, appreciate it!
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Looks really out dated to be honest....

Not feeling this one bit. Good luck anywsy.
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