The sound sync is a bit off, the framerate is a tad low, the transitions are stock, but the clips are nice and well put together, you definitely had a good idea for the flow but it was poorly executed. Also, the pan/crop gets old after a while. I see potential, though, keep working at it.

5.9/10

The pancrop did get old after A while, it felt a little over edited, and the sync was off . Not a bad edit but not good either. The clips worked well together though.

3.5/10

the beginning was so slow that I honestly would have stopped watching it right there. Also when it was in slow motion the frames were bad and made the clip look like it was stuttering. Hope this helped and didn't crush your heart too much lol. Keep trying the clips were good though

Kurumu wrote 3.5/10

the beginning was so slow that I honestly would have stopped watching it right there. Also when it was in slow motion the frames were bad and made the clip look like it was stuttering. Hope this helped and didn't crush your heart too much lol. Keep trying the clips were good though

lol nah man i need feedback like this so i can progress. i honestly dont mind what people have to say weather its hate or not i just take it all in and use it to get better.

thanks for the feedback hopefully my second edit will be abit more eye opening

Hey man, you had a good chill idea.
But you need to learn sync and take off that red thing.
Try to make some cinematics when soldier die.
And try to make little bit faster song this time.
Watch lot of edited clips on youtube, and watch lot if tutorials.

When i started, my edit was worst than this ten times.
But now, im editing for one ofte OpTic member.
So good luck, and render it little bit better