Lyrics were sh*t honestly. Every new artist talks about the same old stuff. Everything else was good though

S3TH wrote Lyrics were sh*t honestly. Every new artist talks about the same old stuff. Everything else was good though

lol i mean thats what i kno, but thanks for the feedback man

Few discrepancies about the track.

1, the intro is way too long. Nearly half of the song is waiting for the verse.

2, your voice is shit. You sound like you're attempting way too hard to sound like a "thug" or a "gangsta".

3, the lyrics are shit. I listened for 20 seconds and turned it off. What does Steph Curry shooting a 3 have to do with bullets flying?


Rap isn't just about rhyming. It's about flow. Having rhythmical lyrics that have meaning behind them. Not just saying some bullshit that every other rapper will talk about.

If you'd like to get noticed, be original. Artists like Logic, G-Eazy, Kendrick Lamar all have original lyrics which make their music enjoyable to listen to.

If I'm honest, the track is shit and I wouldn't listen to it if my life depended on it.

BuNz wrote Few discrepancies about the track.

1, the intro is way too long. Nearly half of the song is waiting for the verse.

2, your voice is shit. You sound like you're attempting way too hard to sound like a "thug" or a "gangsta".

3, the lyrics are shit. I listened for 20 seconds and turned it off. What does Steph Curry shooting a 3 have to do with bullets flying?


Rap isn't just about rhyming. It's about flow. Having rhythmical lyrics that have meaning behind them. Not just saying some bullshit that every other rapper will talk about.

If you'd like to get noticed, be original. Artists like Logic, G-Eazy, Kendrick Lamar all have original lyrics which make their music enjoyable to listen to.

If I'm honest, the track is shit and I wouldn't listen to it if my life depended on it.

Thats how i talk, sad that, that is what u have to take from the track, also it was about being accurate, i was saying how i wont miss like steph curry shooting a 3, obviously u didnt listen close enough, there was a lot of metaphors i guess u missed. maybe positive criticism would b nice too, childish ass mf

If that's how you talk, fine. Just don't make it sound so stressing to speak.

I understood every metaphor correctly. They simply weren't good.

Lastly, if I had anything positive to say about it, I would. But, it's shit. And, that's that.


And, you ask for our opinions and what we think, yet when you receive negative criticism it's "childish"?

Hate to break it to you, but there's people out there who will critique this track 100x harder than I have.

Don't take it has I'm knocking you. You asked for feedback, you got it. Don't take it to heart. Build on what you receive and get better.

You won't make it far if you can't take harsh criticism.

BuNz wrote If that's how you talk, fine. Just don't make it sound so stressing to speak.

I understood every metaphor correctly. They simply weren't good.

Lastly, if I had anything positive to say about it, I would. But, it's shit. And, that's that.


And, you ask for our opinions and what we think, yet when you receive negative criticism it's "childish"?

Hate to break it to you, but there's people out there who will critique this track 100x harder than I have.

Don't take it has I'm knocking you. You asked for feedback, you got it. Don't take it to heart. Build on what you receive and get better.

You won't make it far if you can't take harsh criticism.

lol trust me man, im smiling as i read this lol im not mad whatsoever, jus the voice things and other points u might have thought u made were kind of petty, but i respect ur honesty, peep this and lmk what u think rq [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

Aha, see. This is a nice track.

The lyrics flow nicely, the beat goes well with the vibe your lyrics are sending.

This track is something to build off of. The tempo is nice, the lyrics are decent, and the beat fits well.

The one in the OP is garbage, but this one is good. Definitely something to build off of with this one.

BuNz wrote Aha, see. This is a nice track.

The lyrics flow nicely, the beat goes well with the vibe your lyrics are sending.

This track is something to build off of. The tempo is nice, the lyrics are decent, and the beat fits well.

The one in the OP is garbage, but this one is good. Definitely something to build off of with this one.

thank u man, i understand what you're getting at. I appreciate the honesty more than anything, ill send u links when i drop new shit jus to critique.

Pippen wrote

BuNz wrote Aha, see. This is a nice track.

The lyrics flow nicely, the beat goes well with the vibe your lyrics are sending.

This track is something to build off of. The tempo is nice, the lyrics are decent, and the beat fits well.

The one in the OP is garbage, but this one is good. Definitely something to build off of with this one.

thank u man, i understand what you're getting at. I appreciate the honesty more than anything, ill send u links when i drop new shit jus to critique.

I feel the second a lot more than the first. The lyrics sound better. You honestly used better lyrics. The first one sounded like it was kinda just thrown together. Definitely got some talent, just gotta make sure you use it right.