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hello guys if your reading this then i love you
i was wondering if you could check out my demo,
ive been doing hip for around 4 months now
my idol is Eminem not just because he is the greatest its mostly because i can relate to alot off his past such as his mother was on drugs ect you'll hear everything ive been threw on my demo track please make sure you give me feed back saying if you liked it didnt what i could change about it thank you much appreciated

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sounds like youre talking into an xbox mic.. also whispering.. I mean I dont wanna bring you down man but your gear right now isnt that great, the flow is choppy and your tone is weird, it sounds like youre whispering.

Also you dont need to rhyme every other word.., as I said though lyrics not that that bad. Just gear is ehhh bad, and work on your voice.
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Could do with a tone change and some new equipment buddy but the lyrics aren't too bad
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Thanks guys much appreciated
my equipment is actually top notch the only thing is i turned the tempo up and i use pro tools 10 free version so you cant get any good quality with the program
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i know you dont have to rhyme every other word i know quite abit about rhyme schemes bro
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