Nxmz wrote why you say the f*** word so much?

just in a daily routine. even at work or home ill say it and when I spit freestyles or something usually comes out more. Next time I wont but other than that it's not that bad.

I personally dont like it. It seems like you are reading it off of a piece of paper. Sounds like you are just talking. I personally just find it hard to get into something the artist isnt really getting into it themselves. That what it sounds like. Sounds like you are trying to get it through with. So my advice is just get into it. Like put emotion into. Memorize your lyrics and try to change up the you rap. Like if you listen to it there are bits you are just like plainly talking. Sorry if harsh but just what I would like to see then i might start liking it. But its a good start getting back into it though. Best of luck

Pulsinq wrote I personally dont like it. It seems like you are reading it off of a piece of paper. Sounds like you are just talking. I personally just find it hard to get into something the artist isnt really getting into it themselves. That what it sounds like. Sounds like you are trying to get it through with. So my advice is just get into it. Like put emotion into. Memorize your lyrics and try to change up the you rap. Like if you listen to it there are bits you are just like plainly talking. Sorry if harsh but just what I would like to see then i might start liking it. But its a good start getting back into it though. Best of luck

All good man. Completely understandable to me. And nah I didn't read off a paper all freestyle from the feeling of the beat. I know I need to start putting more emotion in it. Like when I don't record is when I have a lot of emotion. That's why my next one will be better. This was me just listening to something and wanted to go in. I agree not the best but do like lot of my lyrics and can feel the flow for it. You can be harsh because I usually take it and work on my stuff from feedback. Thanks man appreciate the feedback. I'll work on it and hopefully you like my next song.

T-Bone609 wrote

Pulsinq wrote I personally dont like it. It seems like you are reading it off of a piece of paper. Sounds like you are just talking. I personally just find it hard to get into something the artist isnt really getting into it themselves. That what it sounds like. Sounds like you are trying to get it through with. So my advice is just get into it. Like put emotion into. Memorize your lyrics and try to change up the you rap. Like if you listen to it there are bits you are just like plainly talking. Sorry if harsh but just what I would like to see then i might start liking it. But its a good start getting back into it though. Best of luck

All good man. Completely understandable to me. And nah I didn't read off a paper all freestyle from the feeling of the beat. I know I need to start putting more emotion in it. Like when I don't record is when I have a lot of emotion. That's why my next one will be better. This was me just listening to something and wanted to go in. I agree not the best but do like lot of my lyrics and can feel the flow for it. You can be harsh because I usually take it and work on my stuff from feedback. Thanks man appreciate the feedback. I'll work on it and hopefully you like my next song.

NO problem man! Keep me updated ill give a new opinion to each song ill add ya just pm me when you post a new one.

Work on your voice and flow it's scratchy
but you can fix it. Get FL Studio and make beats and see yourself progress you gots this.

Contraption wrote Work on your voice and flow it's scratchy
but you can fix it. Get FL Studio and make beats and see yourself progress you gots this.

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah understandable I will work on it. Use FL a bit but more into Reason 5. Works the same for me

Just wanted to hear what everyone though of it for not spitting for a while and then just jumped back into it. Getting back on my grind now.