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#1. PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2012 3:00 pm
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Here you go.
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#2. PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2012 3:01 pm
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thats pretty nice for the first time
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#3. PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2012 3:04 pm
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Looks pretty solid for a first time, definitely looks like you followed a tutorial but that's okay. I would work on blending the render in with the background more. Try and have some of those c4d's follow the flow of the render as well to make a smoother picture.

A 1px or 2px black border almost always makes a picture look better imo. Smile
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#4. PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2012 3:07 pm
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Thats really good for your first time keep it up ! Laughing
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#5. PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2012 3:08 pm
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That's pretty nice mate! 8/10.
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#6. PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2012 3:08 pm
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Woofers wrote:

Looks pretty solid for a first time, definitely looks like you followed a tutorial but that's okay. I would work on blending the render in with the background more. Try and have some of those c4d's follow the flow of the render as well to make a smoother picture.

A 1px or 2px black border almost always makes a picture look better imo. Smile


Thanks for the great feedback! I will take it into consideration and work on it. Also I didn't follow a tutorial but now I think of it, it looks like I did Very Happy


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#7. PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2012 3:08 pm
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Pretty nice man i like the effects 8/10
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